Make these small changes to your action sentences and be surprised how vivid they become!
Passive verbs can slow things down, so use active verbs whenever it’s possible and fits well into the story.
We’ll look at things that can slow down your story when you write fiction, and we’ll try to help you produce more lively writing.
A pronoun is just a word pointing to something else, right? Boy, is everyone wrong about that!
Get all the feedback you can, and it will help you become a better writer, and produce better books.
You don’t actually have to explain everything immediately. Sometimes you don’t have to explain at all.
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